Bedtime story part 1

So, you know that I truly ADORE writing, correct? So, here is the first book.  I will post the rest of the chapters later. It's not a long book, I promise. Take a peak.

                                                            The Bennett Sisters

CHAPTER ONE

The bell rang for school to be out. Betsy, the oldest, found her other sister, Maryjane. Betsy is a very kind and gentle 12 year old who is always looking out for her other sisters: Maryjane and Sunny. Maryjane is very stubborn and has her moments when the grouch takes over. Sunny is a 6 year old going into 1st grade. Sunny is very gifted. She knows many things. Today, the girls had to pick up Sunny from her piano lesson.
               "Ugh, they spelled my name wrong in the year book. It's one word: Maryjane! Not two!" Maryjane complained. They rang the doorbell. Sunny's piano teacher, Mrs.Leanie, opened the door. Mrs. Leanie is a 45 year old woman that owns a small cottage. Her dark black hair (that has some grey) was pulled back in a fancy bun. Her outfit looks like something out of an office building. She gave the scary eyes at Maryjane and Betsy.
               "Sara needs some practice I tell you. Ugh, she may be gifted but not in piano. Ugh! Good thing your house was- oh never mind. Just take Sara out." Mrs. Leanie said with a grunt.
                "Excuse me but her name is Sunny." Maryjane said harshly. Sunny had a tear running down her cheek. Now, Sunny...wasn't so sunny. Sunny grabbed her books and skipped down the sidewalk.
                "Hey Betsy?" Maryjane asked.
                'What's on your mind, Maryjane?"
                "What was Mrs. Leanie the Meanie talking about our house?" Maryjane questioned.
               "Um, I don't know. Let's go find out."
So, the girls walked home peacefully. They talked about their summer plans and everything.
When they got to their house on Seashell street (because they live by the beach), all of the houses had water and everyone was sad and everything was broken down.
                "What happened?" Betsy asked.
Once they found their dad and mom, their were many questions.
                 "We have to stay in a hotel tonight, until we find a good house." Said Mrs. Bennett.
So, they found a motel near downtown.
                "Hi everyone (yawn) how can I (yawn) help you (yawn) today?" A young boy, probably 17 with rainbow colored braces asked.
               "We need a room." Mr. Bennett said. He was handed a key and they found it. There were 2 beds and a couch.
                   The next day, they went to the hotel pool. It wasn't much. Just a square pool with a bunch of unused, plastic lawn chairs. Mr. and Mrs. Bennett decided not to swim because they needed to search for a house. The girls had fun playing Marco polo and such. Then, Mr. Bennett screamed and took may breaths.
                    "What happened, Honey? Is anything wrong?" Mrs. Bennett asked.
                   "I just found, the perfect house." Mr. Bennett said. It was a cute cottage in the middle of no-where. He clicked the BUY icon.
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Thanks
Sleep tight
Abby